A little while ago I posted a number of character descriptions and in continuation of the theme I'd like to present you with a few more.  As before the images are all taken from Dragon Magazine online and hopefully they inspire someone out there.
 
 
 DRAMATIS PERSONAE 
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The
   old man cut a battered figure as he moved slowly through the
   taverns crowd towards his accustomed spot The regulars got out of
   the way quickly enough, they'd seen the results of getting caught
   in his bad eye many times before and likely would do so many times
   since. 
    
It
   throbbed painfully but everyone knew that a scar remembered the
   weapon that made it, even so his seemed to be putting extra
   feeling into the job. 
“Evening
   Boss” for once he made no attempt to hide his educated tones
   that betrayed a noble ancestry unmatched by anyone else in this
   rat infested fleapit 
“Yer
   late” the overseer grumbled as he always did. “I had some business to take care of” 
His
   employer spun on his heal, a graceful movement for one so fat “You
   work for me you don't got no business less I say you do!” 
“You
   forget who I am” he kept his tone respectful 
    
“I
   forget nothing!  It's you who forget your place” his heavy hand
   swung through the air but the old man caught it with a skill that
   hadn't been his since his youth and with a single movement he cast
   the overseer down amongst the rabble 
“The
   rules have changed I think” the old man settled into the
   comfortable chair that had served as the overseers throne and
   looked out upon his new kingdom. | 
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She
   had been offered power before and always turned it down.  It had
   been one of her first lessons that power, true power, could only
   ever be taken whether at the point of a sword or the prick of the
   quill. 
But
   finally the days and nights of study were starting to pay off and
   the sun was high in the sky when she felt the first stirrings of
   the arcane flame that licked harmlessly around her hand. But even as she moved on to the next lesson she wondered about the location of her ex husband and that penny strumpet he'd run away with. | 
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Lycanthropy.  They called
   it a curse, hell.  He'd called it the same once upon a time.  But
   that was before.  It was humanity that was cursed.  Cursed and
   doomed to lead short lives never truly knowing the joy of bringing
   down a deer on your own without relying on knives or arrows. 
Behind him the sun sank
   over the horizon and with difficulty her raised himself out of the
   lumbering iron wheelchair that had served as his mobile prison
   throughout the course of his life and as the moon rose he gloried
   in the change that would grant temporary freedom. 
As his voice lifted with
   the others who were spread around the city  the change came over
   him, gracefully as it always did to one who has accepted what they
   are.  
    
The night was his and
   although he might wake up in a chicken coop and in dire need of
   clothing, again. That was something that could be dealt with
   tomorrow in the harsh light of the sun. | 
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“How dare they!  How
   dare they?” Sir Escoril paced to and fro in lodgings that, were
   he to ask my opinion, he could not afford to keep more than a few
   days longer but since his pride dictated the best then who was I
   to argue? 
“Damn those Dwarfs! 
   Giving themselves airs as if we didn't all know that they came
   from maggots that fed on the flesh of frost giants.  Damn them a
   third time for good measure!” 
It was time for me to step
   in.  I hadn't realized that it had been bad enough to warrant a
   recitation of the “Dwarfs are maggots” speech. 
“What did they say
   Master”  I didn't really care one way or the other but we've all
   got our parts to play as the nun said to the bishop 
“They didn't bother with
   my petition!  Just kept me waiting and sneering at my
   Tshallox” “It does cover your face well master. Were they envious do you think?” 
“Hah!  I'd like to see
   one of them try to pull this look off with their beards and
   bristles” 
The ranting began again
   but I had heard it before and easily drowned it out with 
    
fantasies of the actual
   Tshallox.  Two months on and that orcish dancer still dominated
   my, and certainly my masters, dreams.  But even so I still
   couldn't understand why he had taken that particular piece of her
   clothing, why he insisted on wearng it everywhere and most of all
   why some of the other elves were beginning to follow his example. | 
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She fought hard to control
   the pen but the delicate instrument jerked and wobbled under a
   grip that was certainly much stronger than yesterdays.  Her
   script, usually so very elegant, was reduced to a childlike
   scrawl. 
“I should have written
   this before” she complained to the cat who only regarded her
   with a pair of milky eyes before returning to its cleaning. 
Dearest Mother, 
Today I truly became free
   of your hated influence.  By embracing the dark undeath I have
   gained the spirit and the strength to at last overcome your
   hateful guards.  In truth they did not put up much of a fight and
   this is something that I will need to address when they rise and
   find themselves loyal to me in every way. 
I assure you that the
   irony of this situation is not lost upon me.  On the word of a
   dried out soothsayer you had me locked in this prison and where my
   life before was a boring succession of soirees and nighttime
   liaisons with, I'll admit it freely, a little working every now
   and then  I suddenly found that without these distractions my
   abilities grew ever stronger. 
It was a glorious night
   when I walked through the black gates of the grand undeath and was
   welcomed with open arms by things best left unmentioned even in
   this missive. 
A scratching sound at the
   heavy door made her look up and her mouth moved in some awful
   parody of a mothers smile before returning briefly to the letter
   in front of her 
But look at me rambling
   on!  I'm afraid that I must cut this letter short as my own
   children are beginning to stir. 
Your daughter 
Elizabeth (deceased) 
PS: We'll be coming to
   visit soon,  leave a candle in the window! | 
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The dawn broke over the
   small pond and the water nixie broke through the thin ice, it
   would be a little while before the day was warm enough to thaw
   everything out and, strictly speaking, she shouldn't have been out
   so very early.  
    
Nor should she be
   gathering her chains and walking away so very boldly into the dark
   forest but the world ran on beings doing what they shouldn't. 
“Whither your
   destination?” the ancient dryad mother was suddenly in front of
   her 
“You know where” 
“They won't welcome you,
   You go to your doom” 
“I'll only watch from
   the branches of your children.  That much is allowed is it not?” 
The old mother stepped
   aside but pointed to a young sapling “My son, Birch would be
   pleased to host you” 
The Nixies watery chains
   scrapped against the Birch as she climbed out onto an outlying
   branch in a small clearing the fire efreets danced naked and mad. 
   If they noticed that they were observed they paid it no mind. | 
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“No!” the fool waved
   his hands at the crowd “you don't understand.  When I said that
   all dwarves should be thrown into the cooking pots for the dogs I
   was speaking ironically” 
He swallowed nervously,
   only slightly comforted by the charm around his neck 
“What about that troll
   crack?” someone shouted out from the back 
“That they should be
   ground down to make roads? The final line in a rather tasteless
   joke” he avoided saying punchline in case that gave some wit an
   idea. 
Mind you you'd need a
   hammer to get an idea into the heads of these rustics and if he
   hadn't been run out of the cities, again, for “stiring up
   trouble”, again then he wouldn't have bothered with the place. 
It wouldn't be long now,
   the crowd was half as smart as its dumbest member, something that
   he'd heard once and taken great pleasure in repeating. 
Ah, there it was.  His
   practised eyes caught the drawing of breath and the mustering of
   courage that was the final moment before crowd became mob. 
He lifted the charm for
   all to see and made certain that all did see.  The last time he'd
   done it this way a blind beggar had shattered the magic, but this
   time it all went perfectly and the jewel filled with a dark smoke
   as it sapped at the will of the people.  
    
As they marched away in
   perfect hypnotic formation he helped himself to a forgotten beer. 
   Soon he would have recruiters doing this for him.  But every
   overlord has to start somewhere | 
 







 
 
The characters here are quite vivid; especially the old man. I liked the idea of the bad eye and what it might do.
ReplyDeleteI admit to getting a little lost in the "he" pronouns, but I liked the imagery and intensity of the surroundings.
They are both intriguing characters.
.....dhole
Thanks. The one eyed man is my favourite and I've scribbled down a few ideas for him but of course nothing is ever set in stone around here.
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