tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5825302477306839823.post3271130394840849614..comments2023-10-19T04:42:42.665-07:00Comments on Jabberwockery: Harts Change: Scribbly Bit - Meeting with Evelyns Father.Gyran Gymblehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/15530108423838293039noreply@blogger.comBlogger3125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5825302477306839823.post-876661261843487862012-05-12T00:12:47.645-07:002012-05-12T00:12:47.645-07:00I agree, very convincing and engaging. I also like...I agree, very convincing and engaging. I also like your phrases you use...one that I particularly loved was when Sor says, “I broke a man's nose for telling me I was wrong in sending you away and he answered me back with a knife”. I also really liked Evelyn's "I could be missing both eyes and still be able to see that you're angling for something”.<br /><br />Good stuff! XDエイプリルhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11625744963850929970noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5825302477306839823.post-25782590870775952152012-05-07T18:51:38.579-07:002012-05-07T18:51:38.579-07:00I'm certainly looking forward to chopping this...I'm certainly looking forward to chopping this thing to pieces (again) and tidying it up.Gyran Gymblehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15530108423838293039noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5825302477306839823.post-60608798359419961142012-05-06T11:15:06.399-07:002012-05-06T11:15:06.399-07:00I got a little confused as to who was saying what....I got a little confused as to who was saying what. But I liked the dialogue. It is very convincing in the way it is being said.Michael Offutt, Phantom Readerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10557969104886174930noreply@blogger.com